Tag: editing

  • Plunge

    A reworking

    Her voice is the background music: 
    The pleasant sip of sunshine
    you get from
    a remainder,
    dividing potential by
    habit.
    Crisp and loving, but better
    left behind
    after falling
    from your chair laughing.
    Jumping in beside her,
    finding
    a difference of
    10 degrees.
    There's plenty more cliffs,
    I just really liked that one.
  • Right Now Ago

    A reworking

    If it doesn’t rip me to shreds, 
    I don’t want it.
    Jaw dropping love
    all tired and sore,
    chests heaving
    with exasperated brilliance.
    Where do I find the energy?
    In snooze fests
    around a warm,
    gentle lake
    algae in full bloom.
    What fun is that?
  • Bottled notes

    A reworking

    I see your island 
    and I call.
    Is that true then?
    An old man
    with bitter excuses for
    his loneliness.
    Beg pardon, imagine please,
    exiling yourself
    for pity's sake.
    Sanctimony
    where you could
    love instead.
  • Parasite Obsolete

    A novelty, 
    she turns each page
    with as much emotion as she reads. 
    Petals pressed, feathers caught, 
    stories from the back of the book;
    pages no one else sees.
    A leak in performance
    held by drying wrinkles. 
    I stared at each word so long,
    clinging for dear life
    to everything she whispered,
    the slow march of typeface
    across skin. 
    Dangling by fear and craving
    off the sidewalk’s end.